Friday 19 October 2012

personification poem

The tank eats threw the mud

Trying to find its pray

Blood
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  1. Hayden's Blog19 October 2012 at 09:19

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  2. Hayze@Swaveland19 October 2012 at 09:23

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  3. Hayden's Blog19 October 2012 at 09:29

    Great poem Taine love the line the tank eats threw the mud.

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  4. Hayze@Swaveland19 October 2012 at 09:33

    Great poem there Taine brought tears to my eyes especially liked the personification in there.

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  5. ShainiaM19 October 2012 at 09:58

    COOL POEM TAINE LOVE THE PICTURE AND THE PERSONIFICATION IN THERE eg.the tank eats through the mud

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